Write a letter to your favorite restaurant. Include the following
- Your reason for writing
- What you like about the restaurant
- Suggestions for improvement
Dear Mr. Robertson,
I am writing to you to express my gratitude for operating such a great restaurant, “Grilled BBQ”. I ate at your establishment and every meal I have had there has been outstanding and truly delicious. Another important reason to write to you is that I am planning to throw a party at your restaurant, on the occasion of my wedding anniversary next Sunday, and I would request you to reserve a table for twenty guests.
First of all, I loved the interior decoration of your restaurant. The ambience and the music are simply awesome. I have tried almost every entrée on the menu and my favorite is crispy chicken. Please don’t ever change the recipe, it is incredible. Secondly, the service is extraordinary, whenever I visit your restaurant, I was given a warm welcome and your staff made sure I am comfortable.
However, I would suggest a couple of ideas to make your restaurant more better place to dine. Try adding more vegetarian dishes on the menu for main course and play some popular romantic songs in the evenings.
I hope you find my suggestions useful and look forward to hearing from you with table reservation details.
Yours sincerely
Kiran Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...couple of ideas to make your restaurant more better place to dine. Try adding more vegetari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, secondly, so, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95098039216 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9157561604 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651960784314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2139329793 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324079929904 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956505367334 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688161447698 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157565163173 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719083441967 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.