There is a trend of increasing of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could it be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion and support it with examples.
Over the last few decades the amount of noise has skyrocketed. I believe it might has also become one of the most overlooked disease cause nowadays. In this essay, I will discuss its devastating effects and suggest solutions to this problem.
One of the main causes of environmental noise is the growth of the Earth's population. For example, Mumbai, a city with population over 18 millions, has high amount of day-and-night unwanted sounds. Even though people have already got accustomed to this continuous noise, it doesn't mean that it is not harmful. It can impact cardiovascular system, lead to hearing impairment and hypertension. The solution to this problem could be creating of citizens' awareness how it can cause a range of health issues. The less noise you create the less effect it will have on others, as well as yourself.
Together with growth of population the need of infrastructure development rises. There are four construction sites only around my house, which create enormous noise starting from 7am till late evening. This leads to sleep depravation and as a result is a reason for lack of energy and poor performance during the day. Soundproof windows could decrease the amount of unwanted sounds coming inside your bedroom, thus protection your sleep. However, in addition, there should be a law implemented forbidding any construction work to start before 9 or 10am and finish after 9 or 10pm.
I believe, it can hardly be denied that it is mainly government authorities' responsibility to tackle these issues and they should begin by considering some of the solutions proposed above, while ordinary citizens should not forget to care about themselves and people who surround them.
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...hemselves and people who surround them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13620071685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89083154619 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3132410228 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15446067674 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045577878296 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398086664423 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832341335326 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295656775829 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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