Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws cure needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
It is true that today, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced which from home or factories everyday. So, some people think that not enough of the litters is recycled and they claim the governments should have a policy to increase recycling.
It is necessary to say thay governments should take action. For example, providing rubbish bad into each family so that sorting different types of waste and make it to have value. Many waste, paper, box or steel from home can sale to governments or decrease council tax. Either, the government should provide junk bank that the citizens can deposit recycled waste and receive a little money. Moreover, the governments should have some advertisements on television to encourage advantages of recycling. For instance, I have been watch an advertising called "3R". For reuse, reduce and recycled and easy example way to do in house such as using less plastic bags, reuse take away box and sale some papers.
In addition, in school, teachers should teach childrens how to recyc;e waste at home and go back to tell their parents and come back to reports their teachers. Besides, clean school together which help pupils have a good attitudes in cleaning Moreover, waste recycling is a very handy process to save our environment. So, the governments should make some rules to protect our environment such as often clean the roads or do not litter indiscriminately andmake people follow the laws by give them back some money.
In conclusion, I believe that most of the citizensin our coutnry already know about the importance of saving our environment. So, we need to efforts to improving our environment conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
It is true that today, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...g produced which from home or factories everyday. So, some people think that not enough ...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun waste seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many wastes'.
Suggestion: Many wastes
...pes of waste and make it to have value. Many waste, paper, box or steel from home can sale...
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Line 2, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eel from home can sale to governments or decrease council tax. Either, the govern...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'attitude'?
Suggestion: attitude
... together which help pupils have a good attitudes in cleaning Moreover, waste recycling i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05395683453 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76976782206 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.521150498 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279451913392 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870780959533 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709996484285 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156280183867 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901067260038 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.