Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and .
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about what subjects students should choose when they study at university. Some people argue that it good be better for childrens to be forced to study useful subjects in the future related to science and technology. In my opinion, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course that they feel interesting.
On the one hand, there are many key reasons why people claim that students must to study useful subjects at university. there are many course at university like medicine, enginerring, information technology or education that are more likely development country in the future. In addition, these coures could provide more job opportunities, career progression and better salaries for who choose learning it and country will be development more and more if the number of students who choose these coures increase. Moreover, governments believe that any knowledges and skills in the economy are covered and this could lead to new inventions and economic growth in the future.
On the other hand, I believe that students should be free about choosing the courses that they are interesting at the university. Firstly, society will be benefir more if students are passinate about the course what they are learning. Besides, nobody cannot predict the subjects what are useful in the future, it change day by day. Moreover, if students enjoy any subjects, they will constantly explore new some things and improve their knowledge and skill.'
In conclusion, students should be to learn the subjects that they like to development their knowledge and skill. That are key that lead to economic growth of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun course seems to be countable; consider using: 'many courses'.
Suggestion: many courses
...seful subjects at university. there are many course at university like medicine, enginerrin...
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...sion and better salaries for who choose learning it and country will be development more...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changes'?
Suggestion: changes
...jects what are useful in the future, it change day by day. Moreover, if students enjoy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17164179104 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65422069595 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.905432865 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410369619228 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1522246025 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929875057718 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270046077663 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106549976671 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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