The chart depicts the information about how the electricity being generated using Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion or OTECO technology. For this process both warm and cold water being used, sea water temperature may rise as much 29 degree celsius and fall as low as 5 degree celsius depending up on the depth.
The system has mainly three components, evacuated evaporation chamber, turbine and condensing chamber. Firstly warm water is heated using solar energy, then it enters in to the evacuated evaporation chamber. From there water is being boiled and creates water vapor and salt. This vapor then passed through a tube where the turbine is fixed and these vapor turns the turbine blades to generate electricity.
In the next stage, this evaporated unsalted water goes to the condensing chamber via a tube. Inside of this chamber, the evaporated water being condensed using the cold water intake from the sea. As a result of this process this unsalted water now become converted in to drinking water after it's initial use. At the end, the waste salt which is derived as a result of this process disposed back to the sea to start the process all over again.
In conclusion, using OTECO system for energy production is a great solution to the todays energy deficiency problem. But the only thing the process is somewhat complex one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this vapor' or 'these vapors'?
Suggestion: this vapor; these vapors
...h a tube where the turbine is fixed and these vapor turns the turbine blades to generate el...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...y production is a great solution to the todays energy deficiency problem. But the only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, so, then, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00446428571 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4805003237 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2254261986 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4166666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105465790632 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477209981414 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778649618065 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867641951715 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648278520599 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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