In the past sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
One of the major professionals of this modern era is sportsman, who brings respect to his country. Because of these persons many countries even developing countries become able to improve their reputations internationally and the people's too. But, nowadays many sportsmen just perform professionally because they have to become a public figure. Therefore, feeling of patriotism also extracted from their intentions. However, they just play to win prizes. Alternatively, it also beneficial because it develops the sense of competition among players of the same sports.
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flaws:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
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better to support just one side , like this:
para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 334 350
No. of Characters: 1739 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.275 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.207 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.86 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.375 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5