The thread of nuclear weapon maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides clean and cheap energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far over weighs the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the fascinating invention of the last century was Nuclear energy. It has actually facilitated some countries of the world with a power of dominance among other countries. Although, it also gives clean and cheap energy resources,in the form of electricity. But all in all we cannot forget the disasters of nuclear power, just 68 years ago. Which was just an experiment by a nuclear country for testing its technological resources in nuclear power. Alternatively, intention to target a certain country can lead a great loss of human, animal and environmental lives.
Being a nuclear power country it is not beneficial for any neighbor country because of it disastrous and dangerous nature. Some developing countries start to think insecure. The governments of these countries become inferior against the country, having plenty of nuclear resources. In terms of army, energy and technology.
There is always a great sense of stress among some countries. Therefore, they want to become nuclear country, either to defeat or capture their counterparts. Some small countries of the world feel that enormous nuclear nation are a real threat for their independence. In this case, it is not feasible inventions for all the humanity. It does not means that being a nuclear power country is completely a thread but there is always a fear of a great nuclear war between greater nation of the world.
It is true and undeniable fact that nuclear country has excellent advantages in terms of cheap and clean energy. But it would be helpful if governments of these nuclear countries spend high amount of national taxes and expenditure on these projects. Majority of the countries use other process to generate electricity for instance, hydro, coal, wind etc.
In conclusion, some people believe that it has many advantages and qualities. In my opinion, it is increasing a fear of a great nuclear war thought the world. Moreover, the mistake of any nuclear country can be able to change the world a war field.
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Sentence: It is true and undeniable fact that nuclear country has provide excellent advantages in terms of cheap and clean energy.
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Sentence: Majority of the countries rely on generate electricity by using other procedures such as hydro, coal, wind etc for generating electricity.
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The governments of these countries becomes inferior against the country,
Suggestion: The governments of these countries become inferior against the country,
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