Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to know probable opportunities of joining hands in the noble activities your organization is doing. I am very much appealed to the kind of activities Cultural Expeditions is indulged in uplifting the downtrodden part of the society.
I understand your next trip is at Bhutan, a developing city in Nepal. From one of my acquaintances, I learned that your company is looking for an English Language trainer for your 2-month trip. I have a Graduate degree in English Language and I work as a Vocational Trainer in XYZ Company. My degree along with relevant experience and a strong willingness to do voluntary services makes a perfect match for this position.
After all the Professional and personal success in my life, I look for opportunities to give back to society in whatever ways I could. I am also involved in several such philanthropy activities with NGOs of my town.These activities give happiness and a feeling of satisfaction to my soul.
My present employer allows me to take 60 days leaves any time of the year, which I would like to contribute fo this noble initiative. Please suggest further procedure in this regard.
Waiting for your positive response.
Thank you
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the downtrodden part of the society. I understand your next trip is at Bhutan,...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...nthropy activities with NGOs of my town.These activities give happiness and a feeling...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, after all, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9854368932 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04729505689 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6308158364 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5833333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139013843874 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519446670528 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471308719215 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568495538362 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456044884734 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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