It is more important for universities to invest in infrastructure and physical plant than to invest in keeping the faculty satisfied.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Universities have an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to attend them in order to establish the solid foundation learning that has a potential to lead our nation toward progress, moreover, they are deemed as an essential place that will help the students to establish a strong bond for their large social network. Therefore, I believe that it is crucial to renewing these educational places due to its benefits in both of improving the studying skills and enhancing the social ability.
To begin with, it is critical instill the concrete basis of education by keeping the students up to date with the new types of equipment and modern innovations that will assist them to fulfill their success. Indeed, the university management should devote more attention and allocates most of their money in updating the infrastructures and provides the laboratories with a wide range of modern devices. For instance, three years ago, my dental school used to renew all the clinics with new dental chairs that facilitated our study and practicing because they had many options that make their use easier than before, in addition, our dean provides all biology labs with new chemical substance that aided us to know a myriad amount of information about different chemical reactions which, in turn, broaden our horizon, in contrast, the colleges that do not used to pay attention to improve the scientific abilities to their students, they will be more vulnerable to a vast array of obstacles because they lack the knowledge about the new innovation and technologies.
Second, the university authorities must have the obligation to provide their students ' gathering places with many changes that will help to enlarge these places because they have an imperative role in building up the social skills. In fact, student at the cafeteria or the campus which are considered as the main gathering locations, they share their thoughts, experience and deal effectively with each other, Moreover, they learn how to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively, thus, such a collaborative environment will enhance the interpersonal relationships immensely which will have a positive impact on their future workflow and productivity, in contrary, the small campus or old cafeteria will surge the students to find out new convenient places for meeting and communicating because they will not feel comfortable at such these bad places. Consequently, the infrastructure in general and the students entertained places in specific must be renewed from time to time to attract the students and help them to refine their social skills.
To sum up, it is vital to take care of the infrastructures investment because they are the cornerstone of the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in fact, in general, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27702702703 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94898440298 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.56222371 48.9658058833 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.3 100.406767564 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.4 20.6045352989 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.9 5.45110844103 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893683878606 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424135502079 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314080383151 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655281119137 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317393869104 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 11.7677419355 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 58.1214874552 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.1575268817 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.01818996416 131% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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