Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, advertising is necessary since it helps companies to increase their profits. Personally, I think that commercials are misleading and make products look better than they really are. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, commodities often advertised by celebrities whom we admire and believe. It is in our nature to imitate the actions of famous people because we consider them more successful and knowledgeable than ourself. However, the general public can be trapped when trusting the prises of renowned individuals. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have immensely dry skin and always search for new remedies that can help me to relieve my irritation. Recently, I saw a video on the Internet where one of my favorite actresses promoted a new cream, which allegedly has helped a myriad of people like me. Without extra research, I decided to give it a shot and purchased a tube in a local store. I was disappointed to find out that the cream was not an outstanding one, but contained the same ingredients as the majority of available lotions. Not only that, but it had a terrible smell, which could not be appreciated by anyone. That is why in my opinion, commercials with celebrities are deceptive.
Secondly, the main goal of any business is to increase sales and in order to do this, manufacturers often hide the disadvantages of their products from consumers. In advertisements they describe the benefits of an item but stay silent about its flaws. For instance, a few days ago I came down with cold and had to visit a doctor. On my way to a clinic, I saw a huge banner advertising a new syrup to treat the illness. The text describing the advantages of this medicine was in bold and vivid and said that it could ease symptoms such as a runny nose and cough. However, the information about the drug`s side effects was on the very bottom of the banner and was written in a fine print that I could barely see. This example illustrates how producers of goods in commercials can trick consumers.
To conclude, I strongly believe that advertisement can be misleading and people should be careful when listening to them. This is because famous people often take part in commercials, and because companies hide drawbacks of their commodities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nowledgeable than ourself. However, the general public can be trapped when trusting the prises...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es hide drawbacks of their commodities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83830845771 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91664624631 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57960199005 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7556508974 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4090909091 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103574945297 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303305943599 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461177863564 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706678773223 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555360850714 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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