Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
The discussion on the advantages and disadvantages of large shopping malls that are replacing small shops which was always been debatable has now been more controversial and both sides have its own logical arguments. I believe that large shopping malls have more benefits than drawbacks which have been elaborated in this essay through a pragmatic approach.
On the one hand, critics may point out that the temptation to browse the shopping malls will lure customers to buy the unnecessary things. For example, according to the University of Sydney, a recent survey on different households revealed that the spending on unnecessary things constitutes to 20% of the total expenditure.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, shopping malls are the great place for shopping where different kinds of shops like groceries, clothing store, entertainment and food courts are available under one roof. Firstly, according to the Times Magazine, June 2013 edition, shopping in a shopping mall has saved 33% of the total time which can be spent in other important works. Secondly, shopping malls have also been a kind of place for meetings.
Lastly, in my opinion, the Government of Dubai is proactively edifying the program and awareness camps to highlight the pros and cons of the large shopping malls in different countries.
To conclude, even though there are few disadvantages of large shopping malls, it has benefited a large number of people in different ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... large shopping malls, it has benefited a large number of people in different ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24050632911 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81639801455 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9724942085 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2222222222 7.25397266985 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245781253645 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104232917654 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527982319074 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129261650621 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539913349143 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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