Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved for women? What is your opinion?
The number of men who are employed at the higher positions in companies is much higher than the number of women. Some people believe that governments must oblige companies to hire more women rather than more men, while others argue that men are capable to do the high-level jobs in high efficiency rather than women. This essay will discuss the reasons why companies should employ an equal number of men and women regardless the type of the task.
Companies must hire an equal number of men and women in their high-level jobs because nowadays the universities have been graduated an equal number of males and females. Governments must compile companies to hire an equal number of men and women since they have equal rights. For example, in the USA, 90% of American companies have hired an equal number from both sexes in most of the sectors in 2010. Therefore, due to increasing number of females who have graduated from post-secondary schools, governments must encourage companies to hire more women.
On the other hand, some people think that men have leadership skills which enable him to lead companies greater than women. Most women don't interest about their jobs after they got married. For example, recent research which has conducted in the USA has shown that women after getting married, they prefer looking after their homes rather than their jobs. But these people are unaware of the fact that nowadays most women have stop thinking of getting married. Thus, increasing the number of jobs for women is necessary, and the governments have to compile companies to hire more women.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why governments have to legislate some rules to compile companies to hire more women. In my opinion, I believe that women shall the rights for working at any position inside the companies, and they have equal rights as men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 313.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97763578275 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40728835116 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44089456869 0.580463131201 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1540456718 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232781818581 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101933389131 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522164443593 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157447894025 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334682131076 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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