Around the world, many people knows about healthy and unhealthy activities, discovered by the science. Despite of this, people follows unhealthy activities.In my opinion, there are couple of reasons for this. This essay firstly talk about the causes of this behaviour and then it will highlight, the steps which should be taken to improve it.
Time is the one of the most reason why people follows unhealthy habits instead of healthy. As we know, healthy activities are time consuming compare to unhealthy activities. Most of the people living in urban area don't have enough time due to traffic and commute distance between their office and home. For instance, As per the article in one of the leading lifestyle magazine. Half of the population living in metro areas relies on the fast food for their lunch, because the fast food is less time consuming to prepare and eat compare to healthy meal.
The second most reason is, following healthy activities are more expensive and not reachable by poor people.For example, families which are depended on single low income can not afford to go to gym or aerobic classes. Due to which, they are not able to do daily physical exercise, even though they knows, it is benificial to their health.
In my opinion, goverment and employer can help to fix above mentioned issues.For example, if government can impose more tax on fast food and they can use this extra tax money for opening more playground and building free gym facilities for low income people. The same way, big corporates can encourage their employees to follow healthy activities by providing some kind of incentives.For example, my employer gives gift cards to the associates, who tracks their daily diet and who goes to gym regularly.
To conclude, people are aware about the good habits which are benificial to their health, but to follow it they need time and money, due to which they often don't follow it. The governing bodies and employer can encourage them to follow healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98214285714 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51930612365 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0542696744 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165784821399 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685752043178 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568065458228 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962949089003 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599988845242 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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