Your perfect partner in the future.
We always want to meet a perfect partner in our life that are your girlfriend, your wife, your boyfriend or your husband in the future. Each person has many different details with their partner. I want to love one or two person but one is the best and if not, two is maximum. Then I hope to get married when I am 26 years old. I think this is a suitabe age. My husband has the same age with me or older than me are all right. Comeback our main theme. In my oppinion, about body of my partner, he must taller than me but not too tall, about 170cm is suitable. He dresses nice but isn't too worried about fashion. Next, he has a good and stable job. The most important is his character. The first, he loves me sincerely, repects me, my hobbies and my family. I want to meet a fun boy, good to talk to and more knowledgeable than me. I hope that because when we talk together we can know more about each other and I can learn more from him. The next, my partner is must friendly, responsible and frank. It will be more easy to share our oppinions if he is a frank person. I also hope he has the same hobbies like me. If not it doesn't matter because I will respect him as long as we fell comfortable when we stay together. I hope he is as trustworthy as possible because I will talk to him many things about me including my secrets. Last but not least, I want he will be by my side when I have troubles and help me to over come. I will do like that too because he is worthy. I know nobody is perfect but I am looking forward to seeing a good person. Ofcourse, I am must a good girl first and study harder, work harder to deserved with my future partner.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-01-23 | Kim Namjoon | 60 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... husband in the future. Each person has many different details with their partner. I want to l...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... 170cm is suitable. He dresses nice but isnt too worried about fashion. Next, he has...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...has the same hobbies like me. If not it doesnt matter because I will respect him as lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02743902439 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25693581988 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3352952314 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.4347826087 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2608695652 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95652173913 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162368551824 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429286144951 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116368289808 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162368551824 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 13.0946893788 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.5 12.4159519038 44% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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