Dear Mr Guptha,
I'm writing this letter to request you that, I'm experiencing a bad financial problem. As you know that I changed my company recently and my previous company has to clear the last month salary cheque,it will take the forty five days to my old company to settle my payment therefore, I have shortage of money.
I am staying in this house from two years and you know very well about my punctuality for paying every month rent. I assure you that I will pay the last month and this month rent as soon as I get my salary from current company. I hope you will understand my situation.
Awaiting for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Madhavi Chenna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 569.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 120.0 206.0 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74166666667 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48985441341 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 127.690721649 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658333333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6486802962 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290585548467 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142557301092 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461485909271 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164098081135 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485448410651 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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