Dear Jyoti,
I hope you are doing good. Its been a long time since we met. Actually my family is migrating to Australia by this month end. So, I am thinking to sell the bulky appliances because we cannot carry them.
The last time when we had met you said that you are planning to buy a television. So, I thought it would be better to inform you about this. It’s a 42 inch full hd smart tv having brand of LG with 200 watts sound output,along with this there are two USB port and also you can enjoy by connecting your network and watch your favourite web series on YouTube and Netflix.
I feel it is a good deal to buy.If you are interested can come and meet me on coming Sunday and also its been a long time that we have met. Expecting a fruitful reply.
Yours friendly,
Madhavi Chenna.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pliances because we cannot carry them. The last time when we had met you said t...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , along
... brand of LG with 200 watts sound output,along with this there are two USB port and al...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...lix. I feel it is a good deal to buy.If you are interested can come and meet me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30921052632 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27322386604 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703947368421 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.08002996 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269784926662 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943534986212 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080765349439 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155793850171 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833396056102 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.2329268293 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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