here is a discussion between our society if shopping centres having more benefits for shoppers than local markets. This essay will discuss advantages of both venues. Furthermore shopping in large shopping centres give people possibilities of entertainment while shopping, however purchasing in local markets, makes the overall experience more personal.
Nowadays, many people like to shop in either big or small shopping centres. These venues, give their customers wide range of products, mostly in discounted price as competition between stores is significant. In fact, these days people want to relief during shopping and large centres can offer them plenty of opportunities, such a cafes, cinemas or playgrounds. Also, shopping venues are located outside the cities and most of them offer parking slots for the public.
Whereas, as shopping in corporate centres has plenty of benefits, local markets can be also a great place to shop. Generally, small markets are located in historic part of a city, what gives their customers an unforgettable experience of shopping in this specific environment. It is apparent, that products sold in regional venues is coming from local farms and gardens and customers will benefit from pesticide-free goods, produced in their neighbourhood. Regular purchasing in local markets is also more personal, as after some time people get in closer contact with a trader and social connections are made.
In conclusion of this, both venues have a range of advantages and it is for each individual to choose, what style of shopping is suiting him or her.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
here is a discussion between our society if ...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...will discuss advantages of both venues. Furthermore shopping in large shopping centres give...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cafe' or simply 'cafes'?
Suggestion: a cafe; cafes
...ffer them plenty of opportunities, such a cafes, cinemas or playgrounds. Also, shopping...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.372 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87106670072 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1963539971 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309024950297 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11406482198 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734839486355 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189381237903 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401269228002 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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