The map illustrates the city of Brandfield where the city planner have manifested to construct a new shopping mall for the local area and have to choose from proposed site S1 and S2. City of Brandfield is quite a big city having Industrial and housing estates including highway with railway and also having a big golf course area for the entertainment of the locals and requires shopping mall as we already know there are two location S1 which is located at the north side of the city near the housing Estate and S2 is located at the south side of the city in between the railway and highway road.
Overall, it can be seen that the S1 location is near by housing Estate and whereas S2 is located in Industrial area, comparatively S1 is the best location for the shopping mall because it is near city centre and close to housing estate which is quite a prime location for a shopping mall then a industrial area where S2 is located which is not a suitable location for the shopping mall.
In contrast, the city of brandfield planner might choose the S1 location due to availability of vast costumers and very convenient to reach the mall from all side of the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... it can be seen that the S1 location is near by housing Estate and whereas S2 is locate...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...prime location for a shopping mall then a industrial area where S2 is located whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54028436019 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53576204944 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440758293839 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.219096831 43.030603864 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.5 112.824112599 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.75 22.9334400587 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33940406524 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252429973304 0.103423049105 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126417811626 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232085514037 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10976239926 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.2329268293 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.62 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.3012195122 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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