The bar chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Scorer on Thu, 01/25/2018 - 07:56

The bar chart illustrates the GDP components in the UK from 1992 to 2000 in terms of gross domestic product from IT and service industry. it is clear that GDP from IT industry has increase over the period of 8 years.

To begin, in 1992 service industry has 4 percent of GDP which low as compared to IT industry which has shown a gradual increase in the GDP percentage, whereas in 1996 the IT industry and service industry both had same average about 7 percent.

In contrast, the IT industry has highest rate of GDP about 15 percent in the year of 2000 whereas the service industry fall behind and rated 8 percent of total share in the GDP of UK.

To sum up, IT industry has the share of 15 percent whereas the service industry only had the 8 percent which was very low in terms of IT industry.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...c product from IT and service industry. it is clear that GDP from IT industry has ...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... in the GDP percentage, whereas in 1996 the IT industry and service industry both had ...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...verage about 7 percent. In contrast, the IT industry has highest rate of GDP about ...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...ercent. In contrast, the IT industry has highest rate of GDP about 15 percent in the yea...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al share in the GDP of UK. To sum up, IT industry has the share of 15 percent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, in contrast, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36049900562 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446666666667 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1132146522 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14727461973 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113960316594 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113833183959 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112565062552 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114322409414 0.0819641961636 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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