Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role models for youngsters. Do you agree with this statement?
In the tech-savy era, we have materialistic thinking is also being raised in our surrounding especially youngsters. Some folks believe in the statement, opponents will not go with the quote. In the following paragraph will illustrate to support the statement.
First of all, when we keenly seeing our surroundings mostly are the followers for the materialistic society and they feel satisfaction after following them. When we listen to any big news about the event or a movie is about to release we are changing our timetables according to those events and films. Such as our football World Cup will be played this year. So we are rescheduling our priorities even sometimes we procrastinate, mostly will be affected.
In addition to, in almost every religion they guided their followers to adopt simplicity. The whole world is somehow facing the inflation, defaulters and many personals, even there are many nations who are living under the poverty level according to the United Nations statistics. And we do spending the superfluous money on sports stars and film actors. schools and tertiary life affecting badly. Everyone discuss about them in the important time due to the materialistic society.
We must have to think that we have to focus on our priorities. So, we can become the real hero and the followers follow us. We ought to look what our families expect from us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'even'.
Suggestion: sometimes even
.... So we are rescheduling our priorities even sometimes we procrastinate, mostly will be affect...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Schools
... money on sports stars and film actors. schools and tertiary life affecting badly. Ever...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, even so, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04824561404 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84919991145 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5128360336 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7333333333 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788489405438 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325058834705 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634444197715 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508559372257 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398451385324 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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