At universities often have a choice to place to live they may choose to live in university dominators or they may choose to live in apartment in the community compare the advantages of living in university housing with the of living in an apartment in the community why would you prefer to life
As compared to bygone era students prefer to study in universities instead of call this sum of the learners have to leave and Universities Hall of Residence for a single room while others prefer to live in society flats I prefer to live in a University rooms I will portray are both side of used in the following statements
There is a plethora of reasons that why some people want to live in a hollow president first and foremost some students are boys and they are not much aware about the surrounding areas due to this referred a part of this will help them it make more friends and get a chance to Shimla with them is Lee moreover some are very any cable in natural they do not use to live in a single room only have a happy to live with friends and do lots of fun all together.
On the other side song that used to live in societies act which has its own pros the previous to face with each other serious about their academies and privacy are referred to live in a single room without any of the disturbance true that they can concentrate on studies instead of focusing on other tribal things because in the horses most students do party at late night which are unbearable for them
Asphalt point of view I prefer to live in a University from which gives me a chance to live with Overseas students and a chance to give me get them and to know about their culture with can enhance my knowledge about cultures also and I can so many things from them such as I can improve my communication skills and I got a chance to make friends from other countries
asphalt point of view I prefer to live in a University from which gives me a chance to live with Overseas students and a chance to give me get them and to know about their culture with can enhance my knowledge about cultures also and I can so many things from them such as I can improve my communication skills and I got a chance to make friends from other countries I don't want any any of them that I cause it it at leaving in a University Hall of Residence give a person more opportunities as compared to other one although both has their own close it all depends on the person choice or thinking
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ferred a part of this will help them it make more friends and get a chance to Shimla...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e very any cable in natural they do not use to live in a single room only have a ha...
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Line 10, column 387, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: any
... from other countries I don apos;t want any any of them that I cause it it at leaving i...
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Line 10, column 416, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...pos;t want any any of them that I cause it it at leaving in a University Hall of Resi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27912621359 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4005271576 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388349514563 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 206.0 20.2975951904 1015% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 299.5 49.4020404114 606% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 881.5 106.682146367 826% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 206.0 20.7667163134 992% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249928141592 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226374343328 0.084324248473 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545564095583 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166581216908 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408752183218 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 101.7 13.0946893788 777% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -120.69 50.2224549098 -240% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 81.3 11.3001002004 719% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.02 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.92 8.58950901804 185% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.4 10.1190380762 834% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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