In today’s world, children are keen on following the same games and television programs like their pals. Even parents are aware of it and motivate their children to view few programs that are telecasted in TV like cartoons, Kid’s talent shows which exhibit their abilities. In my opinion, parents should allow the kids to watch and play the same games or television.
Analyzing the reasons on how the television program or the games precursor the kids to play together efficiently will how prove this thesis in the following essay.
Firstly, children always like to socialize with other kids being it in their schools or other places. For example, it is commonly understood that if a well-known cartoon is watched by the kids of the same age group they mingle quickly and do a short role play of different characters in the school. Also, the character will be well portrayed by the kids. Thus, it shows how watching same television programs can build a rapport among children rapidly.
Another point to consider, when the games are played together, it fortifies the friendship of the children as well as they create a bonding amongst them. For instance, the game of “Angry birds” is quite popular within the kids which enables them to collect the commercial accessories of the game such as school bags, water bottle, stickers, wrist bands etc., Not only do it build the friendship but also it makes them to retard the trivial fights which happened between them. Because of these reasons, it is evident that the parents can allow children to play games similar to the choice of their friends.
To summarize, although seeing the programs and games should be allowed on a restricted basis, it is one of key strategies that avenues to socialize with other kids in the society. Hence, it is agreed to allow the kids to watch and play the same program or games in parallel to their friends. It is my hope that the children are not addicted to the games or television programs that are harmful in nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'games'' or 'game's'?
Suggestion: games'; game's
...ns on how the television program or the games precursor the kids to play together eff...
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Line 6, column 385, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'builds'?
Suggestion: builds
...ckers, wrist bands etc., Not only do it build the friendship but also it makes them t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55428605126 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489855072464 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6439226432 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323731091139 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140072098098 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10658872958 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192584035336 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100087518745 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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