Coming generation health and wealthy countries mandatory to share their food sectors and education to the poorer countries, otherwise National government has to take action against, who has been suffering from hunger and lack of insufficient education, in my view, we have to treat our world like a family.
Two months ago I read a newspaper, it was about the Japan Nation's socio-economic status immensely fall down due to sudden occurrence of earthquake then it leads to inadequate food supply and increased illiteracy due to lack of educational system, it happened in 18th century at the time Japanese government seeks help from rich countries like Australia, UK, and India. These countries hugely transported things to Japanese such as rice, cereals, vegetables.After 3 years Japan had increased in educationally, economically and food sectors also.
In India, south zone sides of the states also severely suffered from food sectors and economically, this has happened by floods.On this Indian Government has responded immediately and started a programme called UNESCO. It started to collect data from which zones of people most affected, it is shown that 80% of the public having insufficient food and 50% of citizens unable to get an education due to collapsing of institutions.Finally, the Central government released large budget to purchase human needs like food, clothes, and building shelters. After few years India has come back to normal stage.
In my opinion, helping is mandatory for one country to another country to bring up in top level or else own country better to adjust itself to food and education.
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also, finally, so, then, as to, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36178861789 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08741108557 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678861788618 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.084383218 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.428571429 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1428571429 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185400065483 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723422871101 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653093169182 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999026708788 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782224457199 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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