People attend college or university for many different reasons (for
example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).
Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays studying has become one of people's priority in their life and they spend most of their time studying due to several reasons.Firstly,a large amount of people specially young ones attend college or university to get prepared for occupation. These days people should acquire specific knowledges and skills to obtain a job. In order to get a job level of education is important and substantial and your education also affect on your income level pretty well.
Secondly,I think obtaining an educational degree has become valuable for people and they mostly believe the higher your education stand is ,the more respect you have in society. That's why I think many students attend college or university . just to get a degree ! Regarding this , I've even seen students who attend university by their parent's force , Because they believe you don't have a noteworthy place in society if you'r not educated .
Last but not least,against the last group talked about,there is a group of students who attend university because they really like learning and acquiring knowledge.Such people study as learning is their hobby and they really enjoy spending their time studying. They don't study for grades or even to obtain a job. Their main purpose of studying is to gain knowledge in their favorite field of study. Mostly these people like to transmit their knowledge to others and they choose to be a teacher or professor at university.
All in all, people attend university in order to have a better life, by gaining more money,acquiring knowledge and obtaining better position in society .
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