In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite
as well. What is your opinion?
The role of importance of Tourism to the underdeveloped countries is widely debated among many people as it has an important role in exchanging cultures between different countries. Some consider tourism has many advantages to their countries while others believed the opposite. This essay will explain both opinions. I do believe that tourism has many vital advantages compared to disadvantages.
On one hand, tourism is very helpful in exchanging cultures between different countries. Moreover, it adds a very beneficial value for the countries economy. Tourism provides many job opportunities and helps also to setup many projects that are very helpful to those who are living in those countries. Also, it has a remarkable role to people who live there to know different languages.
On the other hand, sometimes people depend only on tourism as the main source of money income. Accordingly, those countries will be affected badly if they are exposed to any natural disaster for example floods or earthquakes. In addition, the coming generations will be mixed up as they will find mixed cultures in their countries and that will affect negatively on their attachments to their countries. Finally, many people will depend only on tourism and they won’t have any well to learn any other skill.
To conclude, tourism has many advantages compared to its disadvantages. However, one can conclude that tourism has many serious advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...it adds a very beneficial value for the countries economy. Tourism provides many job oppo...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...s many job opportunities and helps also to setup many projects that are very helpful to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35526315789 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89594273128 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5314818432 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2142857143 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147267121671 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537447830706 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359086961875 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09417503783 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143243048618 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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