scientists and new media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change the lifestyle to prevent further damage. what are your views
Human activities over the last two centuries have brought about drastic climatic changes. These activities have resulted in global warming and further changes in sea level due to melting glaciers. All these can have severe detrimental effects on the life on earth. Whether it is the responsibility of individuals or the government to make amends is a matter of debate. I strongly feel that ,although, individuals can play a significant role in preventing damage, it is largely the responsibility of government to bring about changes far and wide.
On an individual level, in my opinion , people can be motivated to bring about changes in lifestyle which was favourable for the environment. For example, simple measures like planting trees, using public transport or carpooling can help in reducing the level of green house gases which are responsible for causing climatic changes. Hence , this shows that every human effort is important to bring about a positive impact.
Despite this, I feel it is essential that government setup strict regulations about limiting the use of fossil fuels and promote use of ecologically safe, renewable energy sources on a national and global level. Wildlife Preservation Act serves a good example here. This act has proved to be elemental in preventing deforestation and also protection of flora and fauna worldwide ,thereby, helping to maintain the ecological balance. This example shows the far reaching effects a government initiative can have in reversing environmental damage and preventing climate changes.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that government should take an upper hand in preventing environmental degradation and climate change , augmented by individual effort by all the citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48327137546 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.051034253 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5667621025 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196543630713 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695168286754 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497530216496 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120961524681 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221696018691 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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