Government enforces several rules and regulations so as to maintain profound and efficient order among the people. These specific guidelines are enforced using laws that governs the way people are going to behave and act under certain circumstances. Such specific instructions when inculcated in the daily routine and lifestyle, can have immense impact in the behaviour of the humans.
From several psychological studies, it is established that consequences does affect human behaviour. For instance, there are quite strict traffic laws in several countries like New Zealand as compared to India. Due to this, Indian drivers tends to jump traffic lights, switch lanes and involve in several road rages. Now, as government is becoming more proactive, they have introduced more restrictive rules with immense penalties. As a consequence of this, more and more people are now inclined in following laws as they don't want to suffer any negative implications.
In addition to this, consequential fear among humans will tend to make them more amiable towards the laws. As laws introduces such fears - fear of money loss, fear of getting detained or losing licence, or destroying career due to uncontrolled anger. Because of these fears, humans tends to behave and align themselves with the process of how laws want them to act. Also, these laws doesn't stop people from exercising their freedom rights or enjoying tours. They are just there so that people can grow, develop and progress in a very efficient and acceptable manner by maintaining just the right order.
Hence, laws have great role in molding the behaviour of humans. They are the standards that people have to accept and indulge in their daily life. They are the regulations by which we, as people can come together as one for better and more prosperous society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... enforces several rules and regulations so as to maintain profound and efficient order a...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... now inclined in following laws as they dont want to suffer any negative implication...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...laws want them to act. Also, these laws doesnt stop people from exercising their freed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 295.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19661016949 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68083850458 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 283.868780488 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6736266866 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147375490309 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493467299294 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345576185031 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880169783154 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317077219013 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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