Climate Change Essay – Role Of Government To Combat Climate Change.
It is witnessed that the global temperature has increasing incessantly in last two decades. Some environment scientists think that it is happening naturally, but others think individual has made global climate to endangered stage. Here, I intends to discuss causes and its solutions to emliorate our environment.
There are mammoth of causes, which affects our climate. To begin with, trees are being cut down in order to make industries and corporate societies. For instance, wide range of land for business is destroying flora and fauna. Hence, It makes unbalance in our climate and species are dying. Furthermore, private vehicles are another prime factor for affecting our natural environment by using petrol and diesel and their emission and toxic gases are contributing to increase our temperature . Additionally, use of plastic bags and non renewable things are also affecting climate, by this, ozone layer depletion also increasing.
There are some solutions to reduce temperature . To commence with, industries should use infertile land except productive land and use of sustainable solutions and products which can reduce temperature. For example, solar energy should be use by them instead of turbine energy. Moreover, government and NGO’s should increase awareness and have seminars for societies on time.
In conclusion, as per my above discussion I opine that it is not only government’s responsibility, individual and industries should also join hand in hand in order to save our environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'intend'
Suggestion: intend
...al climate to endangered stage. Here, I intends to discuss causes and its solutions to ...
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Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'mammoths'?
Suggestion: mammoths
...o emliorate our environment. There are mammoth of causes, which affects our climate. T...
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Line 2, column 489, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...contributing to increase our temperature . Additionally, use of plastic bags and n...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...are some solutions to reduce temperature . To commence with, industries should use...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...re. For example, solar energy should be use by them instead of turbine energy. More...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'hand in'.
Suggestion: hand in
...ividual and industries should also join hand in hand in order to save our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55603448276 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09834954262 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3515402848 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0714285714 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0612028161782 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224214349167 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417259786825 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376796585139 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146660763959 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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