Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
Given definite finance and effort, government can not solve all the problems at the same time, so it is mandatory for authority to prioritize its problems, then focus on only some of highly prioritized problems. And the most essential question is how to prioritize the problems? The above recommendation attempts to give the answer for that question, in which immediate problems are favored over the anticipated problems of the future? I do disagree with the recommendation because the importance and urgency of the an issue is not really relevant to the time it occurs and as the matter of fact, fo...
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Sentence: I do disagree with the recommendation because the importance and urgency of the an issue is not really relevant to the time it occurs and as the matter of fact, focusing on future problems is sometimes a good practice to bring about higher overall national benefits.
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Sentence: It is true that is the scenarios when the present issues is more of urgent need than anticipated future need, the government should focus on solving such issues first.
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