Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.Writ

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Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

Choosing a field to study in college is a one of the most important decision in one life, when one need to have at least general idea about their future job would be because it is in the college when one can prepare best for their future job. So, what is the criteria for choosing the field to study in college or most of the case, choosing your career? Some only consider their own talents and interests while for others, availability of the job or the ease of finding a job after graduation is the most important aspect to look at. In my opinion, interest and own talent are all-important aspects in choosing the field of study in college, while the availability of the field is only of second importance at to redefine a general field to the specific mainstream and career.

Every field of study as well profession is like a game with its own rules, and you have to be equipped with ability, skills, strong determination in order to win against a lot opponents. Such abilities is your talent and the necessary skilled is only gained through you hard work with strong incentives; so with both talent and interest, you have a good start to win the game, the rest is your hard work and, in some cases, luck. Besides, studying in the field you desire can bring about satisfaction and thus motivation in your day in and day out in colleges, and later on in your future career.

On the other hand, choosing a field of study base merely on job available in that field without consideration of you interest and talent is no different from preparing for a game with low competition but at the same time you have little advantages, because either you are not as genius as other people in this field or you have not tried hard enough for it due to low interest? In addition, it is a long time when you first enter the college to the time when you graduate and apply for the job, many changes can happen during such long period and it is unlikely that the field which had once plenty of job still remains the same.
The factor of job availability may play a more important role in deciding between several interested fields or in later stage when you have to choose specific mainstream in the last two years of your college.

In conclusion, only in your interested field, you can feel enjoyable and have incentives to strive for being the best in college study, which is an essential attribution for your future career with success and enjoyable. However, the availability of the job is also one of many aspects to look at for redefining from a general field to the very specific streamline.

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