Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice the construction of flats in the park opposite my residence at 25, 3rd Street Avenue, Ohio. This is a peaceful establishment with an open ground for children to play and close to 50 families staying nearby that have access to it.
I came across this information from an acquaintance in the local council which is responsible for building the block of flats. I thank him for the useful heads-up but it had to be brought to your notice since this a matter of serious consideration.
Learning about this development took me by surprise as the place chosen for the construction is outrageous. Reason being, this park is the only place where the children staying around can spend their leisure time. To add to it, older people stroll in the park too. Hence, construction of any sort will defeat the purpose, that exist today. This would not be taken positively by the families.
Request you to publish this development in your esteemed newspaper so that it can be brought to the notice of higher authorities and can therefore, prevent the construction. Your support would be deeply appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Rahul Malhotra
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- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 87
- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 73
- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 73
- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94554455446 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79403151322 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1265966169 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207572748406 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628296678559 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046986002497 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109211430888 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110863622521 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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