The given illustration provides information about employment rates in different sectors (self-employed, public and private sectors) in United Kingdom, over a decade between 2000 and 2010. As can be seen in the presented graph, public sector had the largest rates of employment, while self-employed the lowest. Besides that there was a dramatic plunge in private sector.
The table data clearly shows that between 2000 and 2002 the employment rates in public sector remained stable and then increased from nearly 40 to 50. Following that, there was a steady decrease, however after that the rates grew slightly and reached a vertex in 2010.
Furthermore, from the presented information it is clearly, that there was a surge in the numbers of private sector, from 2000 to 2010 rates dropped by 30. What is more, self-employed sector rates significantly rose whole time except from 2002 to 2003, owing to the fact, that then was a slight plummet.
In general, public sector had the biggest rates of popularity all the time, while self-employed the lowest rates. Moreover, there was a substantial surge in private sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, then, while, in general, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19337016575 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77416293252 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0004545431 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223900609737 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103687430844 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04745555412 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164276505764 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426253315746 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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