There is as saying that " Life is unpredictable". Generation to generation nowadays has been change a lot. We can tell the huge difference on our society in the current time in which the current society is more broad and modern.. Our grandparents plays good role model, mentor to young children in different aspect of life even though our grandparents shows the old traditional ways but still it will give benefit to young adults in this generation.
I personally, agree that life is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children we can not predict our life in the future unless you work hard to achieve your dream. Our grandparents were the first one to know what life is all about. I will explain furthermore on my next paragraph the significance and importance of the essay.
In my view, Our grandparents plays a significant role in our society in such a way that they are the ones who educate the young adults and learn the difference between right and wrong because of their life experiences when they were young. For example, when I was young my grandma always tells me that finish your school first before you will have a boyfriend, in fact, I listen to her I finish up my college before I had a boyfriend because my grandma told me that having a boyfriend is a distraction to your studies. Furthermore, our grandparents are being strict because they love us they want the best for us. Our grandparents life during their time is much harder and yet, they want to apply and show the next generation their lifestyle in a way that, young adults will grow with discipline and being responsible.
One more thing, I can say that life is much easier and comfortable nowadays, because of the population is growing a lot of human being are helping out each other, working together to make their life easier and comfortable. For instance, during my younger days I was raise in middle class family and we can afford to pay nanny and drivers to do the work for me in such away we pay them for the service they render and make my life easier when I go to school. Therefore, when there's increase on manpower, the person who does the things for you, the work will be much easier and comfortable.
In my general conclusion, Utilizing human being can make life easier and comfortable, in which can be applicable when our grandparent were children. Also, we can say that the life during our grandparents can also be easy and comfortable because of their old fashion lifestyle and old tradition way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70179372197 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74877742152 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461883408072 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4102106592 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0625 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21192833803 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796692610341 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838173218389 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141986593964 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833369047252 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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