The article discusses about humpback whales migrate long distance for feeding and mating purposes by using the stars to navigate and supports by 3 reason. The professor, however, indicates that star navigating has no clear convincing evidence and refutes each of the author's reason.
First, the article suggest that humpback whales are intelligent to use stars to navigate their brain have high degree of complexity that determines intelligence and they have well develop cognitive ability to abstract system of sensory stimuli. The professor, refutes the author's suggestion. He explains that humpback whales has a average intelligence not highly degree intelligence.
Second, the author claims that humpback whales migrate in straight line because whales can maintain movement in straight direction for example, physical landmark to help them stay to provide them external signs in which to maintain direction and rely on stars to provide them direction. However, the professors opposes the author's claims. He states that migrate in straight line has different explanation. He explains that animals send to explore by object that called magnetic field a bio magnetic field is sensitive to animals. He suggest that it is to orient magnetic field not star- navigation.
Third, the author states that humpback exhibit an unusual behavior the behavior called spy hopping in which whales are looking at the stars to provide them information by navigating in the stars. The professors contradict the author's claim about spy hopping. He states that spy hopping used by animals to hunt that during the day no stars could be seen.
That concludes that the professor is not convincing on star navigating that the author's claims.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...ermines intelligence and they have well develop cognitive ability to abstract system of...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ory stimuli. The professor, refutes the authors suggestion. He explains that humpback w...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n. He explains that humpback whales has a average intelligence not highly degree ...
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Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...magnetic field is sensitive to animals. He suggest that it is to orient magnetic f...
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Line 5, column 534, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...netic field is sensitive to animals. He suggest that it is to orient magnetic field not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, third, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41481481481 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.655439328 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2638099756 49.2860985944 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439548686696 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135976850255 0.0996497079465 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138391538746 0.0662205650399 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228226343763 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944322545625 0.0443174109184 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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