You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is to see a colossal upsurge in climate change. Although there are numerous fields of study in climate change, I believe that air pollution and greenhouse gas emission is the most significant one to be studied. In this essay, I will represent an overview of global warming and provide possible solution.

There are a number of argument in favor of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that thanks to use of fossil fuel that air pollution from industries has accelerated the environmental problem. In fact, not only greenhouse gas emission from cars and trucks raised huge concerns in climate change but pollutant from industries also become a major challenge to the world. We can find overwhelming evidence to support the fact that there is a positive correlation between increase the usage of fossil fuel and carbon emission. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact in climate, as far as efforts from all sector are concerned.

Steps to deal with climate change are many but the most significance one is not far or complicated but accessible and practicable. For example, people should use renewable energy sources such as solar panel to minimize carbon footprint. Similarly, government should encourage people and provide subsidies to buy electric vehicle instead of petrol cars. There are a number of studies by various governmental bodies that show that the usage of recycle goods contribute to minimize global warming problem. Hence, it is important why many people are interested to learn about climate change.

In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that when convergent effort from all sectors are ensured, climate change can easily control.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'accelerated'.
Suggestion: accelerated
... of fossil fuel that global warming has accelerate the environmental problem. In fact, not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, for example, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05460750853 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75999294683 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0894871784 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624288436254 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257958648453 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304384697751 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377926528524 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330323484184 0.0609392437508 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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