Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Physical punishment is often practised by parents in recent past years. Nowadays, punishment in using smacking children has become quite popular among certain people. This essay will argue why the punishment of children physically is a completely unacceptable way of discipline.
Often parents believe smacking is the most effective method of controlling children tantrums. Probably this form of punishment is practised by our ancestors making it completely tried and tested method. They are justifiably worried about their children actions that may affect the society. In addition, the children of this generation have become very difficult to handle that parents are lifted with no options. In recent study says, 60% of parents in India tend to use smack punishment because of unacceptable behaviour and inappropriate words. For these reasons, most parents strongly believe in smacking their children as it is the best way of educating and eliminating the inappropriate behaviour.
On another hand, some people consider that the physical violence can affect the child's psychologically as well as physically. If explored there are other forms of punishments that will help eliminate unpleasantly behaviour such as problem-solving skills and raise their children to be respectful and not fearful. Some examples that have been implemented by many parents withholding certain rewards like preventing television time, leisure time, play time. Due to these form of punishments, there has been a significant reduction in inappropriate behaviour and shown the positive effect in many families. For these reasons, the punishment is the wrong way of education, could potentially cause serious damage.
In conclusion, this essay argued some parents have preferred smack punishment despite other parents have refused the violence way. In my opinion, I entirely disagree with the physical assault that can risk for negative impact on child's development and personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65084745763 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00548956712 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1502664286 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14380998147 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504320098278 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039854532698 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887371167283 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393357153215 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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