Nowadays , artists belonging to different fields show their talent by depicting their art work . Restrictions are always recommended on their performance of art . I think , they should be free from any boundries and I will discuss this point of view in detail in the upcoming paragraphs .
To begin with the reasons why art should not be bound in limits , first and the foremost is that artists will be able to show their talent because they can represent painting and movies in new ways and also they can do new experiments in art . Moreover , artists get help in gaining popularity to nation because they present their art at national and international level and get name and fame . In this way , it helps to bring fortune to their country.
In addition to this , restrictions can affect livelihoods of artists and if their art work is baned they will be unable to earn because their art pieces could not get sold out . Due to this , less people will opt for art work . Furthermore , it is their constitutional right to display their thought in the form of art and also many art lovers will affect if the work of artists is restricted because most people cannot get such paintings and movies . Last but not the least , art never flourishes under restrictions necause they need free mind to demonstrate their message and thoughts and limits may halt their thinking capacity .
To sum up , artists hold an important place in society and people are mature enough to decide what is right and wrong . Therefore , there is no need to put boundaries on it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 267.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76779026217 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61142764854 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3714804863 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236143099025 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937724578794 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542531615505 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150416134573 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566610350441 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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