As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair.
What could be done to prevent this?
There is a boom in the number of tourists visiting historical cities and sites. To facilitate the needs of tourists and promote the amenities to visiting people, historical buildings and sites across the world undergo a lot of modifications which often result in permanent damage to these valuable properties. This essay will discuss some ways to prevent the damages to buildings and sites of historical importance.
Many damaged historical tourists spots were not protected sufficiently by the responsible authorities. The local administration of many top tourists destinations is not concerned with protecting the historical constructions in their area. Proper awareness needs to be generated among the authorities about safeguarding the historical buildings and artifacts. This can be done by training and professional help.
The number of tourists traveling across various countries has increased exponentially during last ten years. People are now more and more interested in exploring old and traditional attractions which causes uncontrolled visitorship at historical sites. All countries should revisit their tourism policies to restrict the number of visitors to areas of historical importance. Moreover, Department of Archaeology and Department of Building Safety should enforce safety standards while doing any renovation at a historical building.
While it is sad that many historical attractions at major tourist spots are already damaged beyond repair, measures need to be taken to stop further damages to sites which are in good shape now. The above-mentioned suggestions can achieve this purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78991596639 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18268921319 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2522955275 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357513000626 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115563680277 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861599679123 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211079317448 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808535575551 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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