In the last decades, the number of students all around the world had increased significantly. Although many reasons contributed for this dramatic change in the level of education which every person strives to, there are two reasons which in my opinion are the most significant.
Firstly, the career world is becoming more and more competitive which pushes young people to do their best in order stay in the top of the pyramids. When the number of job openings doesn't meet the increasing growth of the world population, we get into a situation in which for each job offer there are an increasing nu...
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