A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I totally disagree with the statement. Success is not measured only though money. Successful people make their wish come true to reach greater heights. Although money is one of the key factor to reach to greater heights, it is not the sole thing used to measure success.
Assume if one person dream is to run a charity, in this case he will be successful if he make his wish come true, by setting up a charity. If he is able to gain good words of people then he is successful. Nobody is going to look at the money he is making out of the charity.
Successful people are the one who reach to the desired milestone by achieving their wish. I can quote a real incident, which was published in a daily news paper, that can justify my view on success. There was a doctor who served his patients for free of cost in Assam. He was known to all over India by his knowledge and his mentality to server people. So in this case, we don't look at the money he has, but the attitude he has to serve at people.
People will obviously look at the return of investment if they make some business, but the achievement they made out of their business will be as the footprint in future. So according to me, money is not the prime factor to measure success.
Although, money is required for survival it is not the only factor to measure success. Let;s change people view on success and money so that we can have better living environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...n this case he will be successful if he make his wish come true, by setting up a cha...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ish come true, by setting up a charity. If he is able to gain good words of people...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ncident, which was published in a daily news paper, that can justify my view on success. T...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y to server people. So in this case, we dont look at the money he has, but the attit...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...their business will be as the footprint in future. So according to me, money is not the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37218045113 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36979611593 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522556390977 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.777600488 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6875 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17278730246 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692488538795 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492345561357 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103446802312 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400797004236 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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