Education is the most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree?
Education is one of the key factor to determine the success of the country. It helps people to distinguish the correct and wrong things. Educated people contribute more to economic growth. It is a mush have thing in all people.
During 18th century, importance to education was not given,because many people were not knowing how education will help them to lead a better life. It was blooming from 19th Century. The ratio of educated people is getting increased drastically in recent days. The awareness of education is more in recent days,which helps the people to get graduation at least in basic degree.
I would like to narrate, how the impact of education is leading to country growth with the real use case. Recently, research showed that the advancement in various sectors is done only after 19th century by those who pursued bachelor/master degree. This result shows that education is a key factor for invention.
Latest technology like Artificial Intelligence, Robotics are grooming very well. These technologies will make country to grow tremendously. There is a forecast on list of technologies which will aid job in future. Currently, students are choosing the new technology as part of their graduation. Proposal of new invention is mainly focused in these new technology.
To summarize, education will help the growth of the country in several ways. Awareness in education should be done in rural areas to eradicate illiterate ratio in all countries. This will make country growth to bloom in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...y, importance to education was not given,because many people were not knowing how educat...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ation was not given,because many people were not knowing how education will help them to lead a ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ness of education is more in recent days,which helps the people to get graduation at l...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
...ation is a key factor for invention. Latest technology like Artificial Intelligence...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...list of technologies which will aid job in future. Currently, students are choosing the n...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...s part of their graduation. Proposal of new invention is mainly focused in these new technolo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...country growth to bloom in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18548387097 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.882678183 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2960462026 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6842105263 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0526315789 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141591487637 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442322586413 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616252576331 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800796635901 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493924617383 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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