Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to d their job well. Do you agree?
Holidays are enjoyed by all, irrespective of age. Of late, it’s been a popular discussion whether entities should provide extended holidays to the workforce to motivate them. I fully agree with the ideology and in my opinion, it will de-stress the employee's body and motivate them to work harder.
To begin with, a private company’s management always keeps its workforce on its toes, which creates a stressful atmosphere in the workplace. If they are rewarded with extended holidays then they will be able to spend quality time with their loved ones, thereby strengthening their bond and eliminating stress hormone from their body.
Additionally, there are certain jobs that are physically demanding such as military services, fire fighters, miners, etc. Their work incurs serious fatigue on their body because of which longer vacations are a must for their well-being. For Instance, Indian Government provides a month long holiday for its military service employees in a year.
On the other hand, a longer holiday period will not only reduce the stress level of our workforce but, it will also motivate them to provide their best. Employees who are motivated provides higher productivity with precision. A study was done by Netherland University in which a group of 100 individuals were given a week’s holiday each month for a period of 6 months. Their productivity and accuracy had enhanced and it topped the chart than those who were given regular holidays.
To conclude, we must provide longer holidays to employees to de-stress and rejuvenate their bodies, which ultimately helps a company because their people become more productive with the least chances of error.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35687732342 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78157848479 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3700288849 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241837401498 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837314530433 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501733080457 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13863655231 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382586697567 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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