Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since industrialization earth’s atmosphere has changed. A section of the society believes that’s we do not have enough time to undo the damage caused by our actions, however, others believe that we still have a chance by taking stern actions. In my opinion, we can still reverse the damage caused to our planet through our actions.
To begin with, there is no denying the fact that our ecosystem is at the brink of collapse. Expansion of urban areas by cutting our forest is the major reason behind climate change. Industries are built on fertile farmland and over a period of time, it is contaminating our surroundings by excessive release of chemicals. Needless to mention, the population is all time high because of which we are narrowing river beds to use it for building houses. All the above actions are impacting our mother nature and thereby causing the change in atmosphere. The recent wild bush fire tragedy in Australia is still blazing since Dec’19 due to which we have lost our precious flora and fauna.
On the other hand, if we do not mend our ways of living then we will not be able to save our planet in time. Firstly, we must enact new laws to save our forests and impose heavy penalties on defaulters. Secondly, we must make people aware of the best practices to heal our mother nature. Thirdly, the government must ensure that green practices are affordable in order to be used by all. Last but not the least, the government must make this knowledge inculcated among the children right from kindergarten with which it becomes part and parcel of life for our younger generation.
To conclude, human’s action of industrialization and urbanization has deep rooted impacted on our atmosphere. The government must make amendments in laws and make sure it is followed stringently. Simultaneously, we must give awareness to people and children of its benefits and impose fines on evaders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...re built on fertile farmland and over a period of time, it is contaminating our surroundings b...
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Line 9, column 252, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practices healing'.
Suggestion: practices healing
..., we must make people aware of the best practices to heal our mother nature. Thirdly, the governm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98765432099 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87661440859 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8186602319 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846906308869 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308394102557 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027466929361 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577131869707 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207052485552 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.