The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce the consumption of fossil fuel (gas and oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Humans are exhausting their natural resources. It is time, we must make sure all countries are limiting their utilization of fossil fuels such as coal, petrol, diesel, etc. I agree with the statement and we must change our dependencies on fossil which are non-renewable resources, to renewable sources of energy, otherwise we will be damaging our ecosystem. In my opinion, we must switch to sustainable energy to reduce pollution and climate change.
To begin with, fossil fuels have become indispensable part of our life. We use them to power our vehicles, industries, etc, and burning of fuels releases harmful gases in our atmosphere which stays there for decades. Some of these gases that acts as a catalyst in enhancing the temperature of the earth. The rise in earth’s temperature leads to climate change and it triggers series of events like change in seasons, melting of ice, rising sea levels, draught, flood and lots more. With all these negative aspects in mind, governments must utilize our sustainable sources of energy, which are solar, wind and water to produce electricity and provide it as an alternative to fossil fuels. By harnessing sustainable energy our dependence on fuel will be limited which will eventually limit production of pollutants, also.
On the flip side, we cannot immediately stop our consumption of fuel as it will economic slowdown on global level. Most of the country will not be able to generate funds to feed its people being their source of income and for other nation it will stop their development. Currently, we do not have technology to replace the consumption of oil, gases and coal completely so we must put our efforts in finding an alternate source. This action will require huge money influx across the globe.
To conclude, it is important to switch to other source of energy and reduce pollutant which leads to series of events. Governments must plunge in funds for research on alternative to fossil fuel. Until then we can definitely reduce our consumption of fossil fuel, but we cannot end our dependency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 820, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ntually limit production of pollutants, also. On the flip side, we cannot imme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09064327485 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7845162957 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8641933813 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.411764706 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169224277939 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595677750991 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431438501448 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117015925314 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273258891354 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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