The international Community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce the consumption of fossil fuel (gas and oil). to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Since industrialization, pollution levels are all time high. Utilisation of natural resources such as oil and gas must be reduced by countries across the globe and international society must make sure it’s done quickly I agree with the ideology that we must reduce our dependency on fossil fuel and in my opinion, this will help in lowering pollution levels, all over the world, which is the major reason for the rise in diseases and climate change.
To begin with, burning coal, diesel and petrol releases harmful gases in our atmosphere which stays there for more than a decade. Regular usage of fossil fuel creates never-ending loop of pollutants and these harmful substances will exist in our environments for forever. Presence of toxic elements in our surrounding eventually leads to airborne diseases like asthma, allergies, skin diseases and many more. A research by Hong Kong University has found that usage of oil and coal in industrial sector and automobiles have released tons of pollutants in our air and this is the cause for substantial rise in patients suffering from contaminated air.
Similarly, raise in pollution level is not only affecting citizen’s health, but it is also effecting our climate, too, by enhancing earth’s temperature. From last decade, our glaciers are melting quickly as earth’s temperature has raised due to global warming and it is an imminent threat to countries which have coastline because sea level is increasing. In many parts of the world, we are receiving excessive rainfall which is leading to floods. For example, in the last ten years countries like India and Australia are observing severe rainfall and cloud busting which ends in floods and eventually leading to lose of live and wealth.
To conclude, I agree with the statement that all nation must come up and reduce their dependency on fossil fuels as it is putting our people in harm’s way. Diseases and global warming are all time high because of toxic gases released by fossil fuels.
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- Some people think that advertising on TV is useful for viewers while others disagree Discuss both sides and give your opinion 93
- People who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than those who prefer watching TV To what extent do you agree 73
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, but not local people. Why this is the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 84
- Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...allergies, skin diseases and many more. A research by Hong Kong University has found that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, similarly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18844984802 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83588092139 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580547112462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7580427316 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.25 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145259726362 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511769442897 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754422137536 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112880643316 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972430741318 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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