demerits of facebook and Smartphones

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...ial networking Facebook and smartphones.Firstly, he mentioned the people live a virtual...
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Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...entioned the people live a virtual life.He then talked about the political discuss...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...l discussion which does not save openly.He describes the research was conducted an...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...ing an average of hundred texts per day.Finally, he suggested that the meaningful conve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 31.9359605911 9% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 377.0 1207.87684729 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 64.0 242.827586207 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.890625 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.82842712475 3.92707691288 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32188381937 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 51.0 139.433497537 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.796875 0.580463131201 137% => OK
syllable_count: 116.1 379.143842365 31% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.5024630542 312% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 377.0 104.977214359 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.9669160288 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.0 7.25397266985 510% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0407744946784 0.242375264174 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407744946784 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0407744946784 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 12.6369458128 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.41 53.1260098522 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.9458128079 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.77 11.5310837438 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.23 8.32886699507 159% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 55.0591133005 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 37.0 9.94827586207 372% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.3980295567 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.5123152709 295% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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