Music is the art of expressing ideas and emotions in significant sound forms by using the elements of rhythm, melody and harmony through voices or both. There are varies kinds of musics all over the world, which plays a great role in everyone's life. All kinds of musics are equally important.
Music is the best option for everyone, to distant themselves from the practical life, and get relaxed for sometime. It is an important aspect of education, as it connects us with our real self, i.e soul. Melodies and songs have unlimited powers, it's soothing powers help to relief the mental tension, and the healing power can be beneficial for the tension in the muscles of our body. Thus, it can cure physical as well as mental fatigue.
Some people think that traditional music is more important than the international music, as it represents the culture, history and the thoughts of the community. For example, the Indian classic music express their religion and customs and it is considered as sacred as religion. Traditional music helps a man to get connected with his cultural heritage, whereas, international music leads to globalization and one may forget his cultural identity.
On the other hand, some people believe that international music is as important as the traditional music. Although, it's more like an entertainment, but still it has a few advantages as well. International music can help you get closer and familiar to other nations, as it reflects their customs. The variety of musical instruments are used, with more vocal options, to enjoy. Furthermore, as the man get civilized and the world get developed, the need of music also get changes for a modern man. The parameter of likeness keep on changing with generations, and the international music is up to date with the current need. For example, the most famous western music, which is famous all over the world and listened by almost everyone, because of which people are forgetting their own traditional music.
In conclusion, people can listen to any kind of music they like, but it is important to be aware of other choices as well. They should not forget their traditional music, as it has its own scenario, which can help them understand different cultures and countries better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00264550265 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75853881741 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526455026455 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7125925242 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5263157895 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387631028366 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135316336996 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857987571148 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224675600462 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938813792727 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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