If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area will you choose?

With the development of technology and economy, there is an increasing concern about the environment. In which, climate change would on the top list of the conservation. Global warming, as far as I am concerned, would be the most ad hoc topic, which will be further illustrated in the following two dimensions with examples.

To begin with, global warming may speed up the extinction of species. For instance, the rising temperature could accelerate the speed of ice melting in the poles, and the excessive water would lead to a decrease in lands on which most of the species live. Furthermore, less living areas are the direct results of the decline in inhabits that creatures rely on.

Nevertheless, starvation might be solved by global warming, which will be demonstrated by the following example. According to studies, the higher the temperature is, the higher the quality and the quantity of the food is, especially the crops. Moreover, a more efficient production of food means there would be less effort should be put on agriculture, thus more energy would be allocated to other areas like technology.

In conclusion, according to the above two aspects of global warming, which the drawbacks and advantages indicate its complexity, global warming would be my preference to study in the field of climate change.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14351851852 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92287331971 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0157581704 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129023488509 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503985160033 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407632575967 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803256139611 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201754425083 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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