In today's world, doing physical exercise at the young stage is greatly appreciated. Even in 70% of schools across the globe, physical education and sport has become mandatory for students irrespective of their age. It is agreeed that exercise are vital for the well-being of anyone especially for kids and teenagers. The following essay will elucidate the statement with relevant examples.
Firstly, people need to be physically fit and it is our duty to inculcate at the early days of their life. Besides that, playing games will catalyze their mental strength and confidence which will result in following their patterns of behavior as a citizen of tomorrow. For example, country of China introduce sports education at the age of 3. This will not only ensure their physical strength but also their mental ability.
In the same vein, children as well as teenagers need some extra curricular activities so that they come out of their rote-learning practice. Even the Pedogogical experts in the United Kingdom advices half of the syllabus to be focussing on physical education of college and school children. This proves as an example of how physical education is vital for students across the globe. Furthermore, academic learning and formal examination are unable to provide the physical strength a human body should be possessing.
To sum up, it is essential for the parents to provide equal importance to games and academics for the kids. The society should also encourage the kids to participate more indoor and outdoor sports to catalyze their physical and mental stability. I hope that our nation provides weightage to sports to bring more awards in eminant events like olympics and para-olympics.
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Healthy body has healthy mind
Healthy body has healthy mind, the statement is recognized by many facets, such as doctors, medical scientists and researchers.
Few decades ago, when the electronic inventions and internet were limited and unable to afford my masses, children and teenagers used to have more outdoor activities, such as playing soccer, skating, running etc. The generation of that time had more mental and physical strength, less prone to diseases, have more l interactions with peers. In addition, they have far more leisure time with their parents and families.
As technological development takes place specially with advent of web, smart phones, gaming consoles, more and more kids restricted to stay at home and start spending most of their times on such devices resulting in decrease in physical activities, less focus on studies, and becoming couch potatoes.
As we are progressing, new discoveries are appearing in market to attract these young generations, creating negative impact on children physical engagement, we need to think seriously and come up with the solution to encounter this problem, one such solution is the mandatory introduction of physical education or sports at school level, and make it mandatory for all students to participate in it. This will initiate the shift, though it won’t be fast, but gradually increase the participation. One important point to consider here is constant counselling to kids and children will also play pivotal role in changing their minds.
To conclude, in my opinion it is the most challenging task to mold the children of present era, divert their mind and educate them regarding benefits of physical activities and sports activities on their personalities and next generation to come.
Healthy body has healthy mind
Healthy body has healthy mind, the statement is recognized by many facets, such as doctors, medical scientists and researchers.
Few decades ago, when the electronic inventions and internet were limited and unable to afford my masses, children and teenagers used to have more outdoor activities, such as playing soccer, skating, running etc. The generation of that time had more mental and physical strength, less prone to diseases, have more l interactions with peers. In addition, they have far more leisure time with their parents and families.
As technological development takes place specially with advent of web, smart phones, gaming consoles, more and more kids restricted to stay at home and start spending most of their times on such devices resulting in decrease in physical activities, less focus on studies, and becoming couch potatoes.
As we are progressing, new discoveries are appearing in market to attract these young generations, creating negative impact on children physical engagement, we need to think seriously and come up with the solution to encounter this problem, one such solution is the mandatory introduction of physical education or sports at school level, and make it mandatory for all students to participate in it. This will initiate the shift, though it won’t be fast, but gradually increase the participation. One important point to consider here is constant counselling to kids and children will also play pivotal role in changing their minds.
To conclude, in my opinion it is the most challenging task to mold the children of present era, divert their mind and educate them regarding benefits of physical activities and sports activities on their personalities and next generation to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e physical strength a human body should be possessing. To sum up, it is essential for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20652173913 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74103482223 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9637861051 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226745667783 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811353668986 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610134474124 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147338534023 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653286801312 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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