bank letter
Dir sir.
I hope this letter finds you in good health, My name is Rivan, and I am one of your new customers, I opened a current account last month with IBAN: AE0158643385456324622.
Furthermore, I have requested a debit card to be delivered to my residence address which had been illustrated in the application.
However, a card shipment had been delivered to my apartment a week before by courier, and at the moment I opened the envelope, I surprisingly found nothing.
A couple of days later, I got a letter from your side, debit and credit cards department, asking me to confirm if my card has been received.
Therefore I decided to write you this mail illustrating the whole situation in one hand, and to concern about getting my card as soon as possible on another hand. as it facilitating my banking transactions and cash withdrawal from ATMs as well.
At last, I would like to thank you for all your professional services and looking forward hearing from you.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely.
RIVAN
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| 2018-12-27 | vinshu koul | 84 | view |
| 2018-12-27 | vinshu koul | 73 | view |
| 2018-03-04 | Rivan | 81 | view |
| 2018-03-04 | Rivan | 73 | view |
| 2018-03-04 | Rivan | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nfirm if my card has been received. Therefore I decided to write you this mail illust...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...rd as soon as possible on another hand. as it facilitating my banking transactions...
^^
Line 17, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you. Yours sincerely. RIVAN
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91379310345 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1046879176 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.892568213 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965203818486 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031946846003 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506496961298 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417310452506 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421163636201 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.